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bjohnso5
2826 days ago
Your subheading text "Build and publish instantly your projects online" reads a little strangely to me. I'd recommend re-wording that to "Build and instantly publish your projects online".
Looks neat, though!
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jwdunne
2826 days ago
I reckon "Build online. Publish instantly" has a nice ring to it.
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swlkr
2826 days ago
How about "Instantly build and publish your projects online" ?
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ummonk
2826 days ago
Or better yet, "Build your projects and instantly publish them online", for ease of parsing.
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benatkin
2826 days ago
How about "Build your projects online and publish them instantly"?
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artf
2825 days ago
Thanks to everyone for the advice, what do you think about "Build your projects and publish them instantly online"?
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HeyLaughingBoy
2825 days ago
jwdunne nailed it with
https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=18017791
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