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by arnorhs 5722 days ago
Nice pitch, direct and to the point and I understood everything.

The only thing missing would be a little excitement. You sounded a bit bored.

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Yeah, you were the first one to do a real pitch & I was thinking the same. Be a little more positive & articulate clearly. Feel free to try again! ;-)
Haha thanks for the feedback on the pitch. Maybe I'll run through it again once I get some more coffee :)
I just saw your pitch generated about 100 pageviews, do you see any traffic on your side?
We noticed a small little spike for sure.
Thanks for the data point, I'm pondering which direction to go with this: community (pitch & receive some free traffic) or service (pitch until you're pitch-perfect ... ha)
Pitch until you're pitch-perfect. Definitely.

Besides sounding better, it's actually much more useful.