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by romwell
2898 days ago
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The headline is horrible. "Steamroller surges"? Really? Has the author seen a surging steamroller? That's not what steamrollers do. It's hard to stop a steamroller, yes, but its moves aren't sudden. It doesn't suddenly accelerate. You can see the steamroller a mile coming. It starts slowly and goes slowly. And as you noted, you don't usually resist steamrollers. That's a silly thing to do. Reminds me of the singing octopus from Orwell's examples of how not to write:[1] > The sole aim of a metaphor is to call up a visual image. When these images clash — as in The Fascist octopus has sung its swan song, the jackboot is thrown into the melting pot — it can be taken as certain that the writer is not seeing a mental image of the objects he is naming; in other words he is not really thinking. [1]http://www.orwell.ru/library/essays/politics/english/e_polit... |
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