[_nothing]

It's not the style-- it's just not good writing, but it's trying so hard to be. It's the kind of thing that would show up in a college writing workshop and hopefully get workshopped into something more intelligible. As they say, "Show, don't tell." The passage describes a lot but not in a way that helps you actually visualize any of it, thus it's really hard to follow.

[tnecniv]

Right, any individual sentence is fine and the idea is probably usable, yet it's not clear how each statement relates to those that came before it.