[tandaraho]

Here's another format I've seen suggested by a VC firm:

<XYZ corp> provides <category> solutions to <target-customer> for <purpose>, which allows them to <benefit> by leveraging <uniqueness> technology.

this is the example they gave:

Akimbi Systems provides R&D tools to ISVs and enterprises for automated provisioning of test configurations, which allows customers to deliver higher quality software faster by leveraging the company's automation platform.