[zubairq]

Not bad but was hard to get into as the ordering seemed off. I think start with something provocative to get the readers attention as the first sentence which will force them to read to the end

[kaushik_]

Yes, that part worried me a bit too. Nevertheless I published the article after making a few more changes and clearing up the plot better. You can find it here https://medium.com/@kaushik.varanasi1/point-blank-a-romantic...