This is my draft of first shot at romantic sci-fi. Just 10 min read

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	This is my draft of first shot at romantic sci-fi. Just 10 min read (medium.com)
	2 points by kaushik_ 3048 days ago

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kaushik_ 3048 days ago

This is still a draft. I need some reviews on how the plot is and where I can improve. Thanks in advance!

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zubairq 3048 days ago

Not bad but was hard to get into as the ordering seemed off. I think start with something provocative to get the readers attention as the first sentence which will force them to read to the end

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kaushik_ 3045 days ago

Yes, that part worried me a bit too. Nevertheless I published the article after making a few more changes and clearing up the plot better. You can find it here https://medium.com/@kaushik.varanasi1/point-blank-a-romantic...

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