[kagebe]

A common mistake for us Germans. Especially if one hasn't worked in an English-"speaking" environment (US/UK/..., international company or publishing in English academic proceedings/journals) and/or learned how to write idiomatic English. Abusing and over-using relative clauses is a favorite speaking and writing technique in these parts. ;)

[rogual]

It's common among native speakers too. You might even say it's stopped being 'wrong' and started to become just 'informal'. I just find it really jarring, unless the clauses are really short.

I hope my comment didn't come across as anything other than the constructive criticism it was intended as.

[flohofwoe]

No worries! The blog post came out much longer than I intended. I was writing it in one sitting and when I was finally done I didn't feel like going over and editing it. If I had more time, I would have written a shorter blog post (and sentences) ;)