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by RiderOfGiraffes
5838 days ago
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No, it feels real to me. I think the writer is not a native speaker of American or British English, and much can be forgiven. I just think the author needs to decide what his point is, and tell and entertaining story while getting there. This feels like it was written without editing. |
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