[egwynn]

I was gonna reply to your first draft (the one which started “reeks of troll”), but then it was already changed by the time I clicked the “reply” button. You’ve made at least five edits since then. Stop, think, write, post.

[igloofoo]

My bad, I felt I sounded a little passive-aggressive. New on the boards. Let me know your thoughts on the final draft:)