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by saimiam 3175 days ago
I see this all the time with tech startups - the marketing copy on your website is technical and emotionless.

Pinpoint production issues instantly.

LogDNA is the best logging platform you will ever use. Learn why enterprises, startups, and hobbyist developers all love LogDNA.

This appeals to no emotion at all except maybe your vanity as co-founder. I took the liberty of rewriting it to make it more people focused.

All your server logs in one place

Gain insights, find bugs, and monitor systems from one simple, ultra-fast dashboard. Fall in love with LogDNA along with a myriad enterprises, startups, and hobbyists alike.

(FD - I'm a techie trying to improve my communication skills to appeal to _people_.)

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Sounds good! Yeah our site is definitely in need of some love. Just haven't had time (busy plugging tech debt and working on new stuff). Planning on major improvements next month along with onboarding.
I'd love to take a crack at humanizing your site in return for some endorsements. If you don't like the work, you can always hire a proper marketing consultant.

Email in profile.