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by addicted
3173 days ago
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I thought it was pretty well done considering the target audience. Brief tagline "Friendship bracelet. That you can code" to pique your interest. Then a user story showing how someone actually used it. I'm sure it can be improved significantly, but I feel the idea behind pitching why you would want to buy it (it's a friendship bracelet that does cool things like light up the same color when you're together) as opposed to its capabilities is not necessarily that far off the mark for a product of this nature (e.g. the Apple Watch landing page as of right now doesn't describe anything about what the Watch can do...it's just selling the fact that it's a watch). |
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