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by Vindexus 5807 days ago
I'd change this text: "Hackathonia is about bringing bright, motivated people together to build amazing apps in competitive yet collaborative, team-based competitions known as "Hackathons"."

I'd put something like:

"Hackathonia is a great way to find "Hackathons" near you. Hackathons bring bright, motivated people together to build amazing apps in competitive yet collaborative, team-based competitions."

That way you get to the meat of what you do faster.

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Great suggestion, Vindexus. Some of the text definitely needs to be less verbose.