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I'm not saying the author doesn't think the demographics are relevant. But she doesn't just complain about "wikipedia has to many male editors and is thus treating some topics unfairly", but looks into why and what could be done to help fix that. (Which IMHO makes it a lot better than many other articles about the topic.)

Your inital comment ignores the latter part completely: "Everybody is allowed to edit" doesn't make much sense as a response to "this is why some people's contributions are (seemingly unfairly) rejected", and if you actually stopped where you quoted, you would have missed the latter part entirely, since it starts in the paragraph after. If your comment was intended to make another point, I missed it.