[gumby]

First of all, your article was fine: you had a question, you thought about it a little and got some data, and wrote it up. More people should do this.

As an article it's not particularly clear in method or presentation. It's not especially clear in what it's measuring, process, isolation of variables. But it's not attempting to be a journal article. So that's not what I meant about "needs work" (though it is hard to pull the message out of the wording).

But I don't think it supports your thesis. Again, thats part of what the web is about (not every posting should be a well polished pearl) so I"m glad you posted this. If you cared though, I'd improve your process. This post might not be worth rewriting though -- that's up to you.

[invalid_name]

Yes, I got what you meant, and I know that some parts, especially those which cover measuring, should perhaps be investigated deeper. I'll outline the objectives better next time.