[coralreef]

Is it possible to rewrite your points to be "achievement" oriented rather than "technically" oriented?

As an example, your best point is last on the list: "Optimized the website to serve pages from 5s down to less than 1s via Apache configuration and caching."

It should also be worded as such: "Increased page speed by 5x faster with optimization techniques".

Be a little more sparse on technical details, and more bold on your achievements. Assume the reader doesn't know or care about the technical details. All they want is to be persuaded that you get shit done.

Avoid redundant information like "Consulted with ownership to establish project scope and business needs." Like seriously? You talked to people and worked on a team? No shit. Embellish your achievements, you must sell yourself.

Also move your education to near the bottom, lead with experience first.