[skuhn]

If the point is actually to reassure the reader, the tone is completely off. I don't find seething rage to be very reassuring.

[Aloha]

It depends on the ideology of the reader its trying to reassure.

[timClicks]

You left out contempt and complete lack of sympathy. People die without access to asylum.

[skuhn]

No one has the right to demand entry!

(especially not people we gave green cards and visas to after subjecting them to years, or decades, of bureacracy and vetting)

[aerovistae]

I agree completely.