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by xiaoma
3430 days ago
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The basic breakdown of disruption was okay for someone unfamiliar with the idea, but the writing was horrible. It was littered with 1-3 sentence "paragraphs", bold text and exclamation points. And sentence fragments. And often a combination of multiple irritants! To be honest it felt like it was written for people who aren't really comfortable with reading anything longer than a few sentences at a time. |
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