[coreywstone]

Well I was a skater as a kid and now a very not-cool father of four, so that meme is not far off. :)

I'm a UX guy not a professional copywriter, so I may have missed the mark a bit. I was trying to keep it friendly and casual, and maybe a bit campy with the "HERO" theme. Anyway, I just removed a couple of the memey lines. Thanks for the feedback.

[romanovcode]

Yeah, I would go with more "professional but not too professional" approach. Unless your main demographics are 13 y/o kids that is.