[benwr]

Specific critiques about how you can improve your blog post:

1. Data is always necessary to back up claims like these. Almost _any_ kind of quantitative data will do - just a simple average! just give me something I can replicate on other data sets. Similarly, just saying "we made up these variables as a combination of these other variables and called them Flavorfulness and Musicality, look how nicely our circles line up!" is not useful to anyone - a formula or methodology would be.

2. As a software engineer, I came to this post expecting to find a way to improve myself. I invested time in reading it because I expected a payoff in the form of, for example, a metric I could apply to my own work. I suspect that the author of this post intentionally gave the impression that the post contained tools like this. I didn't find anything remotely like that.

3. More generally, this post does not show signs of being written with the reader in mind. You have not given me any new information that I can apply; instead you have given me a marketing pitch (we did this data analysis, we promise! Don't you want us to work with you?) dressed up like information.