[CPLX]

> Rather than waiting in line at a retail store, missing out online, or simply forgetting about a sale – Frenzy puts the hype of the best product releases in your pocket.

So I was attempting to decipher this sentence, which while apparently written in English, appears to be incomprehensible. I've identified the subject as "Frenzy" and the verb as "puts" and the object as "hype" but then I got a little lost and wandered off.

In all seriousness, learning how to present product in way that's free from content free superlatives and meaningless phrases will help greatly in communicating with customers.

[herge]

Would it help you if they phrased it as "Frenzy helps their clients grow their business by delivering results-oriented digital solutions?"

I do not think anyone working for a 'digital strategy firm' should be the first to throw stones.

[CPLX]

Seems to me that the opinion of someone running an agency that, among other things, implements Shopify integrations, would fall under the general category of customer feedback.

[finnh]

I hope you two know each other IRL. If not, maybe you should - you both have a good sense of grammar. And humor.

Made me laugh, at least...