| a few ux things: - background image could be a little more crisp for big screens and retina - white text at the bottom doesn't indicate what is clickable and the "Site Design © 2016 Jabari Holloway" is much to prominent for something that adds little value to the site - blue buttons look very bootstrappy, I'd use the outline versions (there is a button-outline for bootstrap, no?) to keep the weightless look fitting the theme of the site. - some subtle shadow on the floating text in the color for the "black" in the picture would add readability, fading away really close stars (just 1-2px at 50% opacity can to wonders and is hardly noticeable as a shadow) - the about screen needs a big button for [come on in and have a look], the close button is counter-intuitive and hard to find here. - the reddish text in the about me looks a bit off, I'd stick to black, white and your highlight color blue - I'm personally not a big fan of half-transparent backgrounds. - I like the paging on the stories, but once you scroll the back button is gone, it should be always visible - I would consider always showing all menu points, make achievements and stories visually different, but keep them on screen. - I like animations to be very quick, so I don't have to wait for them to "use" the site. The growing glow to make the text readable is much too slow for my taste. Maybe use "ease-out" to quickly grow to size and still have a smooth stop. - a fancy suggestion: show all achievements and stories, but connect each group like star constellation and have "Stories" and "Achievements" as the constellations names ( http://www.physics.unlv.edu/~jeffery/astro/constellation/con... ) - when scrolling down on stories, the bottom menu moves up the page, guess that's not supposed to happen. |
-I like the way the outlined buttons with transparent background look
-I'll try your subtle shadow suggestion
-Do you absolutely think I need a call-to-action button on the about screen? Do you think adding Achievements and Stories links respectively to the "Achievements" and "Stories" text within the about screen would work well?
-While the reddish text looks off, it doesn't stand out well with black, can't be seen with white (based upon the current background color of the about screen) and looks unappealing with my highlight color blue. I agree with you on sticking to a color palette, but doing so didn't work well in this case
-Thanks, I wrote my own pagination algorithm :). I'll add a back button that's always visible
-Do you know a way of making the achievements and stories menu points visually different without the page appearing too busy?
-I'll try the "ease-out" instead of "ease"
-Cool suggestion! I'll keep it in mind for a future design of the site!
-The bottom menu moves up while hovering over a story, which happens incidentally if the mouse intersects a page while scrolling. I'm not sure how to keep the hover effect and disable it while scrolling
Thanks again for your help!