[can09]

An interesting counter-point, but rather poorly written, and far too short. You need to flesh your ideas and accusations out properly, and your ending line makes for a lazy and frankly rather pathetic conclusion. You should invest a lot more time into editing and review.

[XparXnoiAx]

Doesn't matter if it is long or short, as long as people understand it.

[eropple]

It matters if you're actually formulating an argument. I understand what you are saying and am unmoved. Preaching to your choir is amateurish.

[XparXnoiAx]

It matters if you're actually formulating an argument. I understand what you are saying

What is the argument? If you start thinking about it, I think you'll find it's actually quite hard to create a coherent counter-argument.