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by scottyates11 3756 days ago
On top of the others' suggestions, I would suggest you to keep the sentence short and understandable. I don't know what company you are going to apply. Just a reminder that not all HR managers have the knowledge of IT/ programming/ coding. Try to prepare an easy version for those who have no IT background.

Showing the impacts/ results would definitely help.