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by michaelmior 3793 days ago
Sounds interesting, but you should have someone edit your copy. Below is a sample of some issues I found.

> We are the first to do this.

Have cheap prices? Not really a selling a point.

> We care about not only the privacy

"the" is unnecessary here

> we guarantee that our interface is top of the notch

The expression is just "top notch"

> so that you could easily spin up and deploy new servers

"can" easily spin up

> every month you'll receive discounts and other prop

What is a "prop"?