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by michaelmior
3793 days ago
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Sounds interesting, but you should have someone edit your copy. Below is a sample of some issues I found. > We are the first to do this. Have cheap prices? Not really a selling a point. > We care about not only the privacy "the" is unnecessary here > we guarantee that our interface is top of the notch The expression is just "top notch" > so that you could easily spin up and deploy new servers "can" easily spin up > every month you'll receive discounts and other prop What is a "prop"? |
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