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by ldd
3873 days ago
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I hope others can help too, but I noticed that your sentences sound a little bit off. They seem directly translated from Spanish. Here are some examples: My principal goal (Mi principal objetivo)[My main goal] not the money (no es el dinero)[not money] need it for help my family to solve some things (lo necesito para ayudar mi familia a solucionar algunas cosas) [need it to help my family solve some things] to help my mom be quiet(ayudar a mi mama a estar tranquila) [helping my mom have no worries] and so on and so forth. As another comment suggests, you should have a native English speaker look over your CV, and overall grammar. |
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