[darrelld]

Here are my 2c from looking at your website:

- It feels like you followed a series of tutorials and put these together. Anyone can do this and it doesn't make you stand out.

- The website doesn't feel very polished. You still have placeholder text for project 5 and 6.

- The instructions on the header telling me to click on the project images feels amateurish.

- I think your portfolio needs some work to make it stand out. I'm no resume expert but I have employed others and your resume makes me really have to stop and think if you'll be useful to my team. When I have pile of resumes on my desk and a series of other projects with deadlines I would pass on that resume and look at stronger ones. Yes I know it sucks but that is the reality. Focus more on selling your experience and previous work. What have you achieved that stands out? Don't just tell me the tools you used. Anyone reading a tutorial can use the tools.

- You mention English isn't your first language. Have an native English speaker review your writing with you if you can. While I couldn't pick out any glaring errors, everything felt a little off when reading it. Even if you didn't say English wasn't your first language here on HN I think I might have picked up on it and it would make me wonder how you could communicate clearly if you joined my team.

Hope these help. Best of luck!

[theviajerock]

That is great, i will think more deeply about the things that can stand me out, and i will build more interesting things... I definitely have to improve my website.

I followed a couple of tutorials, you are right... It is a bit difficult for me to be "creative" and build something original and striking... I have to improve this.

Thank you very much for your advice!