[S4M]

The link you submitted seems to work for mobile only, for some reason I couldn't open it from my computer, so I give the non mobile version below [0].

Apart from that, I did compare a few of the original answers from Bill Murray and with their translated versions, but I don't think the translator makes it clearer, he just added some punctuation and some context (pause, laughs, etc.).

[0] https://www.reddit.com/r/IAmA/comments/3pommg/looks_like_im_...

[maaarghk]

Although, the OP says "edit- top level responses edited for grammar and punctuation" so it was probably a more marked difference before.

[Nexxxeh]

If you just went to that thread 15 hours ago, you did not read the original answers. It was vastly different before it was edited. It was unreadable for me.

68 words in the opening sentence for one of the replies.