| first, i think it looks good. the following are a bit nitpicky. you should focus more on your work, and tell the story behind what occurred on each project. put yourselves in the shoes of a potential client: they probably want to know how the process works, etc. remember, you want people to buy your services, so show what those services are front and center. big pictures. don't hide the detail behind the click (in the modal). put it out there. make it the star of the show. i'd alter the tone to say "what can i do for you?" rather than "what can you do for me?" i think the former is a more common style. i'd drop the bit about the deposit. it's not really useful - 40% of what exactly? if it won't make or break the customer choosing your services, don't bring it up so early. if anything it might be better to express the price class of your service (in general ranges), but leave everything else up for debate once the person contacts you. the top nav menu doesn't do much on a site this small; perhaps that space could be used for dramatic effect rather than this utilitarian role. i think that's about it. good luck in your venture! |
Yeah, expand on the information a little bit. I was trying to strike a balance between too much & too little information.
Do you have any suggestions on how to expand the portfolio like that (no modals), without cluttering the page?
Okay, easy peasy!
That was my attempt at trying to describe the process. I failed terribly! I'm going to have a little think about a better way to describe the process (and more of it) in a concise & clear way.
Any dramatic effect suggestions?
Thanks a lot!