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Show HN: Are we clear enough about our offer? (quora.com)
1 points by AndresOspina 4968 days ago
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No. Your elevator pitch should start with the simplest explanation of the value your product provides, THEN explain how it delivers that value.

For example, "Golearn is Yelp for higher education. It helps students find the perfect school by mixing official information about the institutions with social commentary."

...or something.