Problem is that people don't read. They scan for a rough idea of what any site is about. On your site, you need to start reading to figure out what this page is about (bad), and then have to get through a lot of distracting links and text that are irrelevant. Once you start writing you waste time telling us what your product isn't (physical teleportation) and describing how great it is before simply telling us what it does.

Suggest showing people what you do with a screenshot or photo that makes the app sound incredibly useful, with a huge "DOWNLOAD" button right beside it. The text should convince people sitting on the fence.