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Please review my startup and website design (blackcallingcard.com)
2 points by masti2100 5557 days ago
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I find the message and the service don't match. I don't see what life being short has to do with a picture of a yacht or a women drinking wine, or even what your service has to do with living luxuriously.

While I think your service is useful in many ways, but it took me awhile to figure out what your service actually is.. you're wasting the space above the fold on pictures that aren't even relevant. You should focus the merits of your service. To me it seems more like a joke or a scam. Just my opinion.

ok point well taken....high level concept was to send a message that Life is short so use the best calling card. We tried to keep that consistent throughout with the videos and messages on all other pages and so on.
to be honest I kinda like that.

Life is short, so use the best calling card. -> then explain why it's the best.

1. Record your calls, etc...

Life is Short. Record Your Calls.

I wish you would slow the pictures way down and have them fade into each other. They are all pictures of relaxation but the flipping is a little hectic

Thanks....will take care of it