The Unlucky Billionaire – Gotta catch em’ all

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	The Unlucky Billionaire – Gotta catch em’ all (medium.com)
	15 points by writerlexs 3628 days ago

5 comments

skizm 3628 days ago

Pokemon Go is AR not VR. Also, I'm sure Zuck is enjoying PGo just like everyone else.

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writerlexs 3627 days ago

Yes it is :)

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bllguo 3628 days ago

EDIT: Ah, made the connection at the end w/ Zuckerberg. Still don't think this is well written though.

If someone told me a high school student (or even a precocious middle schooler) wrote this, I wouldn't be surprised.

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writerlexs 3627 days ago

I've just tried to write something thats funny and simple to understand. But point noted :)

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heckless 3628 days ago

It really irks me, when a sentence has an unnecessary comma in it, it probably should have been a semicolon instead. Bugs, the crap out of me and I can't keep reading anymore!

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amarpatel 3628 days ago

> everybody,

I read that sentence too many times

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writerlexs 3627 days ago

Thanks! Fixed :)

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codemac 3628 days ago

> A 10-Part Series that explores the day-to-day life of one of the most successful Philanthropist, Revolutionary and Futurist of our generation

... well I hope our author "M" has some future-thinking humility as well.

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cortesoft 3628 days ago

This isn't satire?

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technofiend 3628 days ago

Right? I mean if drubbing you over the head with four foot high walls with a 10 foot metal panel above is more aesthetically pleasing than trees doesn't scream disconnected from reality what does?

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fleitz 3628 days ago

Yeah that sentence essentially translated as 'build the wall' to me.

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codemac 3628 days ago

I got confused with the story line, the earlier parts didn't seem to relate to the final paragraph.

s m r t, I am so smart.

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meira 3628 days ago

Very good!

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writerlexs 3627 days ago

Thank you. I plan to make it a weekly or biweekly thing :)

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